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The Trapped Oxygen In Lungs by ~thepoisonedpen:iconthepoisonedpen:





The sky fell in yesterday.

The sky fell in and my heart opened up.
Some kind of triple bypass, some clinical
surgery. I walked into the stars and felt
almost nothing along with the sense
of infinity at the same time.

The world isn't my kind of place.

The world isn't the kind of place
Where anything can really belong. Alien planet
in an all too familiar universe. Its vacuum
for ever sucking out the life
of this Dimension. My microcosm of
Society was obliterated by a
miniature nuclear bomb.

Wings have been burnt off the fallen angel.

Wings were burnt off and then there
was jusy the eternal tumbling
into the eminence of Purgatorial bliss.
The way pupils dilated and the
restrictions were torn away. Free
to float in Uncertainty forever.
Free to wallow in the material consumerism
forever.

Words are like the winds that float across these pages.
                                           Where nothing really seemed to make much
biological sense. Metaphysicality has formed the coding for my mind and the semantics of the way I work
Has ceased to matter. Because everything is so conventional now.
©2005-2009 ~thepoisonedpen
:iconthepoisonedpen:

Author's Comments

spontaneous poem. just seeing how it turns out.

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:icontheleprechaunbandit:
I liek this...
i dont really know why, but i do.
It's really cool.:)

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Do you know what the queers are doing to the soil?
:iconhitooou:
:clap:

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"Live in Peace"
-Matt 1989-2008

Do not look at life as a joke, all it takes is one instant,and everything you are is gone..

Live life to the fullest, and never look back. Enjoy love and always live in peace!!
:iconathenarules:
It has resounding feel to me of resignation and acceptance....my favorite line is:
The world isn't the kind of place
Where anything can really belong. Alien planet
in an all too familiar universe

Good piece I like it even though it makes me a bit sad. :(

:)

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You can't kill a woman that was born to hang.
:iconparadoxy:
I told you what I think about it - I guess I could say it as sort of like in using words, you connected for a moment something that is beyond describing with words.

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I'm a bit like the morning piss - nice in a weird kind of way.
:iconterrorvision101:
excellent as always

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You Chose To Live On Your Knees
I Rather Die On My Feet
:iconjustpolly:
i like it, real passion comes wit spontaneity, thers more emotion wit it-gd job :)

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-polly:you say i'm weird as if it's a bad thing...
:icondark-angelic:
random spontaneous things rule!!! =)

nice one!

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i'm a banana flavored m&m. bite me.

:heart: |dark-angelic|
:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
The structure is really effective, the subjects are discussed with amazing eloquence and once again the flow does not falter :+fav: this has got to be one of your best!!

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Tranquility interrupted by a jealous mind, life overcome by the grief of the ending, celebratory drinks for a lost occasion, a mind full of black, the tainted, dirty white.
Check out my stuff~~> [link]
:iconnimbus9:
lov'n it, you seem to be finding your voice a bit more with this one.

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Long days and pleasant nights

~jef

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