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A falling star
would you ever wish upon it?
Light emanating, a powerful
ray that catches faint
Glimmers in your eyes.
Universes collide to the
sound of a pin
slowly falling,
with implosions set to
the timing
and the rhythm of your heart,
beating. The life within:
reminiscent of the worth of
a thousand lights within
this sky.
A falling star
I wished upon one and
gained your love in return.
©2005-2009 ~thepoisonedpen
:iconthepoisonedpen:

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For Matt :heart:

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:iconhummuss:
truely beautiful :D

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"Seeing into darkness is clarity. Knowing how to yield is strength". -Lao Tse

Here is a short story I wrote called The Wishing Well:
:star:[link]
:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
Beautiful...what more can be said?! :)

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Tranquility interrupted by a jealous mind, life overcome by the grief of the ending, celebratory drinks for a lost occasion, a mind full of black, the tainted, dirty white.
Check out my stuff~~> [link]
:iconlilithlairpoetry:
Spelling errors:

Emanating (eminating)

Rhythm (rythem)

Just a few errors spotted, but indeedly well written poem!!

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"Bad memories can kill me, but the good ones I have can save my life" ~ LilithLairPoetry
:iconsephiroth-mage:
Pretty! I'm sure he'll love it!

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NEW ACCOUNT= [link]
:iconchook626:
wow. really beautiful. lovely imagery. love the universes colliding with the sound of a dropping pin. very beautiful and quiet. great stuff. :) x

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"My first job was actually selling doors, door-to-door. That's a tricky job, that one...
*Bing bong*
'Oh, hi. Can I interest you in a...aww...shit, you've got one havent you? Alright, cheers...' "
-Bill Bailey.
:iconflawedsilhouette:
Great poem; very emotional. I like it.

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I'm sorry, to myself, that I'm a risk, to my :heart:.
:iconparadoxy:
That's so... beautiful...! :cries:

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I'm a bit like the morning piss - nice in a weird kind of way.
:iconathenarules:
'Universes collide to the
sound of a pin
slowly falling,
with implosions set to
the timing "

Gurl, you can make words into fireworks...

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You can't kill a woman that was born to hang.
:icondark-angelic:
i LOVE THIS

it deserves a fav...matt is a lucky guy =)

so sweet :hug:

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i'm a banana flavored m&m. bite me.

:heart: |dark-angelic|

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